IMO, the lower half of the piece is BEAUTIFUL, however, for some reason (maybe it's my perfectionism kicking in) I can't get over the face, naval, and chest areas. Her skin seems a tad too grey, her face is great (please, don't get me wrong) but lacks a sort of human characteristic, I can't quite tell you what, and lastly, the breasts feel too.....unnatural.
these are a little bit more animated and anatomy-wise skewed from my normal char illustrations. if you notice everything is thinned, elongated and just totally unnatural it was done on purpose.
8/10 mate, GREAT JOB
you are an artist man !!!!!
One thing I could say needs correcting are the faces... they seem a bit unnatural and some parts are unsimetric, unlike in your other arts... o.ó
But they're still great.